Would anyone help me workshop a haiku?
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kakaburra · 26 comments
5 years ago
kakaburra
· 5 years ago
You guys are all adorable. <3 Thanks.
dr_richard_ew
· 5 years ago
Daisy broke the
5/7/5 rule of haikus
The cops are coming
5/7/5 rule of haikus
The cops are coming
dr_richard_ew
· 5 years ago
Oh god dammit I
Broke the rule as well this time
I am so so fucked
Broke the rule as well this time
I am so so fucked
jay2327
· 5 years ago
You're hilarious
I follow for the smiles
Please make up some more
I follow for the smiles
Please make up some more
dr_richard_ew
· 5 years ago
I'm trying my best
This is getting difficult
I'm losing my touch
This is getting difficult
I'm losing my touch
jay2327
· 5 years ago
We are all human
All humans can make mistakes
You are still going strong
All humans can make mistakes
You are still going strong
rydler
· 5 years ago
Tick tick tick tick tick
Tock tick tick tick Tock tick tick tick
My clock has broken.
Tock tick tick tick Tock tick tick tick
My clock has broken.
222daisy
· 5 years ago
wait I counted it a million times- is that not 5-7-5?
dr_richard_ew
· 5 years ago
Poem is 2 syllables
222daisy
· 5 years ago
oh! not the way I say it :)
222daisy
· 5 years ago
humor me and just say it fast lol
dr_richard_ew
· 5 years ago
How about this one:
"It's snowing on Mt. Fuji"
You get the reference?
"It's snowing on Mt. Fuji"
You get the reference?
jay2327
· 5 years ago
That's a tricky one
The syllable count changes
It has two or three
The syllable count changes
It has two or three
jay2327
· 5 years ago
Reference can have two or three syllables depending how you say it. Ref-rence vs ref-er-ence
jay2327
· 5 years ago
Never mind, I looked it up, it's three.
dr_richard_ew
· 5 years ago
Well that fucking sucks
Oh well. I guess the haiku
Police will get me
Oh well. I guess the haiku
Police will get me
jay2327
· 5 years ago
Please do not fear, friend
For the police will not come
You're in a safe place
For the police will not come
You're in a safe place
rydler
· 5 years ago
Wee woo wee woo Oh
The police are at the door
Get on the ground now!!
The police are at the door
Get on the ground now!!
jay2327
· 5 years ago
Do not try to run
Surrounded from all angles
We have got you now!
Surrounded from all angles
We have got you now!
shrekislove_
· 5 years ago
I panic and run
The police chase after me
This is my swamp now...
The police chase after me
This is my swamp now...