https://docs.google.com/document/d/1aoe0Yx2xBxAWBH9Bi-SKdNNbmgOft5rZ8vpGmIvojy8/edit?usp=sharing
I've already decided on the ending, and my cover letter is still included. I just edited my name at the bottom and did send my real name.

It's pretty good. Maybe flesh out the backstory more instead of using a cold open.

"My real name here yeet"

I'm at work but i'll read through it on my break

I was planning on revealing more and more as the story progresses, thank you for the tip, @flyingoctopus!
Thanks, @metalman, I hope you enjoy it

I read half of it on break and I'd have to agree with @flyingoctopus in the it could be a bit more fleshed out but it's good nonetheless

Thank you !