Help me with a story
by creativedragonbaby · 26 comments 5 days ago
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mrscollector · 1 week ago
Their society should most likely be like how harry potter books magic world had magic all around but people carried on like they were normal people with out magic. Unless the technology ones are the bad guys than you should give it a twist like they done away with human emotional items like family and kids are just added to the hive like replacement parts for the old when they are needed.
tarotnathers13th · 1 week ago
What if society was incredibly AR based? So to an outsider not form the society, everything would appear very bare bones and undecorated, but once you have access to the AR net everything pops to life, and is more colorful than it was. Walls that were once empty have advertisements and posters all over them, newscreens pop up out of thin air, and directions to locations like restuarants appear as a line on the ground. On another topic, you could make the power sources be convential sci fi stuff, but with a twist, like they draw in power from an alternate realm where it is nothing but pure electricity, or use magic to generate energy for short burst of power, to charge a phone or whatever knick knack they have available.
grimreaper · 1 week ago
Or maybe their technology is biomechanical so that it looks organix but is actually mechanical
grimreaper · 1 week ago
**organic
creativedragonbaby · 1 week ago
I'm thinkin that it's the sort where biomechanics has reached a new level, power sources are much more complicated, schools teach robotics as a compulsory subject, and they're looking into bending the laws of physics.
creativedragonbaby · 1 week ago
I mean, I'm writing about how they're using the gravitational force resulting from the density of an atom's nucleus as a power source.
creativedragonbaby · 1 week ago
You guys focused on the fantasy aspect of it. It's not really what I was going for. Anyway, I looked it up and she's gonna have "work clothes" made of graphemes and Aerogel. Search it up
creativedragonbaby · 1 week ago
Graphene*
mrfahrenheit · 1 week ago
MechaHitler
grimreaper · 1 week ago
SuperMechaDeathChrist 9000
creativedragonbaby · 1 week ago
Omfg guys
creativedragonbaby · 1 week ago
That reminds me of the time I tried to make a story titled "Dragon Alien Robots"
creativedragonbaby · 1 week ago
It didn't past one sentence, thankfully.
ranticusprime · 6 days ago
If you're looking for a power source based on bending the laws of physics, might I suggest perpetual motion machines? In addition to what you already have, of course.
creativedragonbaby · 6 days ago
I'll look into it
creativedragonbaby · 6 days ago
Aaaand this is what I found.
Perpetual motion is motion of bodies that continues indefinitely. A perpetual motion machine is a hypothetical machine that can do work indefinitely without an energy source. This kind of machine is impossible, as it would violate the first or second law of thermodynamics.
ranticusprime · 6 days ago
Correct, but I figured you might want to use it if you're already bending the laws of physics.
creativedragonbaby · 6 days ago
Hmmm... sure. Though I am trying to make it as realistic as possible, with crazy tech that does crazy things. I'll consider it and see how it fits into my story. It's a bit big though, isn't it? Can't exactly fit one into your phone or pocket?
ranticusprime · 5 days ago
Definitely not. I was thinking along the lines of wind-farm-esque, but with reality-bending machines. And feel free to use it as you see fit, or not. It's your story, after all.
creativedragonbaby · 5 days ago
Yeah, this has got me thinking a bit. Also, the questions I asked everyone that got answers I wasn't satisfied with helped me come up with new questions, like "What does a society need to function"