:D

This is one of my stories https://my.w.tt/UiNb/KGlWUj4P1I

This is another but it’s not as good. https://my.w.tt/UiNb/JRxOvL7P1I

I know I wasn’t invited to this little party but I studied Creative Writing and took publishing classes so I’m always looking to give my shitty opinion

Go right on ahead

Plz read the first one of mine. I’ve lost my Motivation(TM) and I think it’s under the couch or behind my bookshelf.

My plot for Ether Academy is to have one of the main supporting characters to go missing, then it gives other characters that have been introduced time to shine.

Or maybe Jean Reno as Will

Also vampires are gonna appear in one of the later books.

ok but... wot bout mine? ;-;
If I'm being needy lemme kno

I’m reading right now, kinda been busy with stuff so I didn’t have a lot of time. Did you need corrections on grammar on stuff or wat?

Sure, I'm not the best eith grammar

Case in point.

Just give me ideas for the rest of the plot.
I have some scenes I'd like to add in... gimme a sec, I'll make a new chat

I don’t have a motive for the antagonist

He gave up on dying and wants everyone to feel the despair he so longs to end

Shits and giggles, that's my antagonist's motivation

I guess so... I’ll see how it works out

Any other suggestions?

Not really