Only if you look at mine fam

sure. Linkit

That's the 6th chapter but you get to the first one through that

Ah ok

Sorry, my mum dragged me to do yard work

Ok so first up: NO POST ON SUNDAYS
Also I've looked up a few writing tips in my time and apparently it's annoying to the reader when metaphors are repeated in a short time frame.

Hey I read yours and the storyline and characters are really good now can u plz read mine?

Hey you should search up the difference between claws and talons. I think they're pretty cool

Alright I'll read it tonight

Mmkkkk now what

Good but not my kind of genera

Mmk. Np bro.
I need help on how to make my universe more detailed.

Dont make it too complicated to start off. Work up to the complicated stuff.

Yeah, but I've looked up to JK Rowling. She's made it so complicated and intricate, I'm in awe of the little details.

My writing style is straight and to the point, like an arrow.

Mm, but I like finding little hints and references. I want to write a series people can make theories about