First Bit
Chris had originally warned Evelyn that she was like a trinket to Tara.
Evelyn finds out why the two hate eachother so much.
This is also the first time Tara transforms. Her anger leads to speedy growth. It also demonstrates that Damien is in control of Tara, but not her tail.

Second Bit
Evelyn has a premonition dream, which will most likely be removed or changed. I just thought a death of a main character would be nice. Or maybe two.
I'm also now questioning the immortality wine. What purpose does it serve in the story? This scene also helps Evelyn develop and understand her powers.

Third Bit
This whole scene might be removed. I'll keep a few lines that stand out.

Okay so I give it a 4.5 outta 5 because

:D

TBH I don’t have a conflict. I’m not 100% on the antagonists motives

Honestly I want the antagonist to win I love em

Me too. I try to make it so you think the good guys gonna win but the antagonist has a genuinely good plan and wins. Or, a typically bad person (Satan) is the good guy and a typically good person (God) is the bad guy.

Yosh that's perfect

But I DON'T HAVE A MOTIVE FOR GOD!!!

He's like "I wanna do something and you're not gonna like it but I have no idea what it is yet so..."

Trying to help but messes everything up

Ermmm.... maybe?
He's supposed to not have good intentions.
Otherwise one of my characters wouldn't get angry.
Satan has good intentions, but one character is jealous and wants him gone.

Greed or lust could be another reason

Greed sounds accurate
But what does he want? The world? Control over the characters? Revenge?

He God so him seeing how the characters aren't doing what he wants them to he starts trying to controls em to be molded into exactly what he wants

That could work

Any other suggestion

Revenge is always the go to answer for something like character a was like yo dude let's make a deal and god was like okay character a failed to keep his part of the deal

How about some other stuff? I'm a bit too early in the story for figuring out the climax (even though I have several scenes) what's some stuff I can put in to make the story longer? I've planned for Evelyn to do some Transfiguration training at the school, what else?