I've been told that I should write a book because of the way I write.
Ex. 'Samantha don't know what to do. She had finnished all he chores and homework, she had beaten all the games she had, she even 100 percented those games. There was nothing left to do.But then it dawned on her that she forgot something. Her magic. "THAT'S IT!" she happily exclaimed. She hasn't tested her powers much for fear of equivilency, but now she knew it was safe.'
IDK, tell me if you like it.
Ex. 'Samantha don't know what to do. She had finnished all he chores and homework, she had beaten all the games she had, she even 100 percented those games. There was nothing left to do.But then it dawned on her that she forgot something. Her magic. "THAT'S IT!" she happily exclaimed. She hasn't tested her powers much for fear of equivilency, but now she knew it was safe.'
IDK, tell me if you like it.
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timebender25 · 6 comments
8 years ago
americassuperhero
· 8 years ago
Grammar needs work. What's the story about? Kinda confused.
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· 8 years ago
Sounds pretty good, though, as said above, grammar and simple sentence structure need a bit of work. If you do ever write a book, and need an editor or just someone to look it over, I'm happy to help! (I'm currently in the process of writing a novel.)
timebender25
· 8 years ago
Thank both of you. I'm dyslexic so it helps.
americassuperhero
· 8 years ago
Is this what your story will be? From what I've read it sounds pretty interesting. I would like to read it.
timebender25
· 8 years ago
This is just a tiny bit of a full story. A ship of an un-written tale.
Basically, I've come up with it on the spot.
Basically, I've come up with it on the spot.
timebender25
· 8 years ago
Snip*
