Man am I the only one that didn't have a problem with the cliches, I think it's cool that I kinda know someone who really has a gift for writing and Doctor this story was great

Cliches are inevitable. Nearly everything's been done before. It's not about how many there are, it's about how you use them to do something different. My point is, a lot of the cliches in the story were cliches and nothing else - a few did do well, like "die in the dream" for example.

I'm not much of an author, but if I want to wrote movie reviews for a living than I need to be at least a good writer.
Also, I do have more stories than that one, all fitting in to one huge story it took 2 years to make up, but I can't explain that on funsubstance due to it being too big

I mean... I'm willing to listen. Go ahead and explain!

No, I mean it would literally take too long. To give you an example, I once told the entire thing to a friend of mine on skype. Counting a supper break and just some conversing, it took FIVE HOURS.

Yeah okay, but...
Gimme the abridged abridged version.

I don't even know if I can...

Is there anywhere I can go to find the full version

Not really. I keep the whole thing memorized. I can tell the story, but it would probably use up all however many posts (80?) In one day.
I can say though that it involves all the characters I have made up in my entire life, and I mean grade 2 to now. I took them all, no matter how silly, and put them into a more serious and super long story. Last time I counted, including minor characters, I have exactly 77 characters

You need to right that shit down man, probably get a published book series out of them

Maybe. I want to say that each one would need more than one book tho, which would be forever. Take the length of the madness train story, and put that into about 70 to 80 books

why are there two versions of this chat

25 words or less. Go!

God of all, Dr. Ew and a super powered guy named Omni have a fight to last all eternity in the end, has to stop.
And that's just the last part of the story. Confused?

Nah makes sense

Oh, you don't know the half of it...

Alright fine, 250 words or less.

Conductor, do you have any questions for Sero

Ummm... I don't know. How are you doing?

*poses like Mettaton*
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