dr_richard_ew · 7 years ago
I feel like this is supposed to be a breakup message
harmonywho · 7 years ago
Punctuate it so it is
unicycle · 7 years ago
It's a love letter or a breakup message depending on the punctuation.
Dear John,
I want a man who knows what love is all about. You are generous, kind, thoughtful. People who are not like you admit to being useless and inferior. You have ruined me for other men. I yearn for you. I have no feelings whatsoever when we're apart. I can forever be happy—will you let me be yours?
Gloria
As opposed to:
Dear John,
I want a man who knows what love is. All about you are generous, kind, thoughtful people, who are not like you. Admit to being useless and inferior. You have ruined me. For other men, I yearn. For you, I have no feelings whatsoever. When we're apart, I can forever be happy. Will you let me be?
Yours,
Gloria