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Why can't the younger generations use their imaginations and build their vocabularies instead of cursing. The story was good but did not need all the cursing to be good or sound real. People grow up, cursing all the time makes one sound so juvenile.

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Why must you curse? The point would have been made just as well or better without the cursing! Cursing is usually done by those with small vocabularies. It really does make one sound stupid as well as uncouth.