https://docs.google.com/document/d/12-Xj9Mt3AAhd9dlUz48X6N2qT-QmvPYuGKeGjBdXMqg/edit?usp=sharing
I've done two different beginnings but neither feel right

It started like Harry Potter but slid towards what I can only assume is Furry erotica so I stopped. You shan’t trick me!

Who says you have to write chronologically? Start wherever feels right, then work on figuring out how characters got to that point.

It's like an essay. The introduction is way easier and more accurately written after the body is established. Don't beat yourself up too hard.

If you've got an idea, write it. Just make sure you have an ending. Also, I know I've looked at your stuff before. It's easiest to format your work to be more readable, too.
Write a scene you've always wanted. One you hate. Have Evelyn do something no one would ever think of doing.

Oh if you want spoilers Evelyn dies. Permanently.

Ok, holy hell, you are invested in this. 24 pages is mighty impressive even for me. In terms of writing the beginning, I would advise to extend the introduction to MC. Insert some more instances of their normal life before the events begin to unfold. Or, if you want to begin at that moment right away, give some exposition on the moment at hand and only then jumpstart the story. That's the way I normally go about things. Also, I may read through the whole thing and give some more bits of advice as comments on the doc. By the way even though @scatmandingo commented very accurately on the way the whole thing looks, it's definitely not the weirdest thing I ever read.

Also that spoiler was completely unnecessary granted that I already begin to get feels about the character I read about 300 words as of right now.

Just like One Piece's beginning, it's random, no one knew who that Purple hair guy was

Lol. Yeah, I admit it’s all a bit furry with half humans, but I can tone it down a bit. Back, animal ears! Back!