There have been people posting links to stories in the chat section and this wholesome community inspired me to go into writing again... I was wondering if french speakers could give me honest opinions and help me improve a whole fucking novel (yeah I'm not always asking for help but when I do...^^) I wrote a while back but am not satisfied with. So the first draft is finished and I'm aware I'm gonna have to destruct and reconstruct big parts. If not, I think I'll try to translate it in English, because I would still very much like your feedback.
I'm gonna upload it on Wattpad I think, but it's not there yet.

Aye, yeet it my way

Nice! I'm going to as soon as I figure how to publish stuff on wattpad/quotev, it doesn't seem to work.... Does this link work by any chance?
https://www.quotev.com/story/11667854/Amychiva

Works for me

Wonderful! Now this may not be really your type of text (I wrote what I needed to hear as a 14 yo girl) and you may fid this stupid and dull but in any case be honest please!

Aye, lemme read it

Well, it was just two pages but I liked it. The text is well constructed, the way it was written, like the way the narrtor is speaking seemed a bit weird to me at first but then it fits the character so it's noice.
It remind me a bit of the San Antonio's books I used to read.
A simple text but "actif" enough to keep you reading.
Noice

Oh my god you know San Antonio! I love these books! (it's like my guilty pleasure) Ok nice feedback, I'll upload the rest (it's long as fuck though, don't feel obligated to read it all).

Ok I put the first ten chapters!

Alright, I'll read them soon and let you know what I think