I wish it were more subtle, like she noticed a scent but didn't know what it was or didn't attribute it to her daughter. This makes it seem like she knew what it was, but just didn't care for some reason. I really do like the post, though. Short but scary.
I don't think it's scary just creepy, the worst I can think that can come from this is a nightmare of a man sleeping next to you while you are dead, and if you do I think you need counseling.
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