There's not much to get.
Basically, the protagonist startles a bird to the point where its heart gives out and it dies.
So he throws the carcass into a tree, but it falls down onto a baby's stroller while a family walks through the park.
Pretty straightforward, but maybe that's just me.
What about him spitting soda all over the body and the cops?
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· 9 years ago
It doesn't move the story forward in any way.
He spilled soda over the bird, and that's really it.
And sure, maybe seeing the cops startled him, but that's kinda where it ends, so..
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· 9 years ago
It kind of does move it forward by spitting the soda on it and seeing the cops he may think the cops will assume he drowned the bird with his soda so he throws it
Basically, the protagonist startles a bird to the point where its heart gives out and it dies.
So he throws the carcass into a tree, but it falls down onto a baby's stroller while a family walks through the park.
Pretty straightforward, but maybe that's just me.
He spilled soda over the bird, and that's really it.
And sure, maybe seeing the cops startled him, but that's kinda where it ends, so..