I wish I was this talented

Being able to draw cartoons is a talent. Being able to draw realistic proportions is a much greater talent.

The shading is nice

That's amazing! Wish I was that talented

It's a really good drawing of her, except for the part where her eyes are freaking 3x the size!!!! (sorry just my opinion)

Everything's right except the face. It looks nothing like her. At least get the nose right.