Fifty Shades Of Grey is disgusting
8 years ago by rwby_rose · 1677 Likes · 16 comments · Popular
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· 8 years ago
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The most annoying part of the writing (aside from all of the other annoying parts) is the repeated "Oh, my"... *sigh*
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· 8 years ago
I didn't read the book. Was "oh my" really in there that much or are you making a joke I don't get?
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· 8 years ago
@mightyoak: no, it totally was in there. Perhaps I am overdramatizing, but it felt like once a page at least. I am sure it was less than that...but no less annoying and awkward.
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· 8 years ago
I don't doubt it. I've read a few pages that were online and I'd rather read Twilight than that pile if nonsense
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· 8 years ago
Wasn't it a fanfic based in twilight? Or was it the other way around?
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· 8 years ago
Fanfic based on twilight
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· 8 years ago
Neither would of been a good decision
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morganwinchester
· 8 years ago
(Would have*)
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· 8 years ago
I didn't know which was correct, but I knew someone would come along and tell me
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reju
· 8 years ago
What happened to no kink shaming?
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morganwinchester
· 8 years ago
I mean if your kink is shitty writing...
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reju
· 8 years ago
It's not, I'm just saying.
geluregis
· 8 years ago
It's a bad portrayal of BDSM, and it's not written well enough to make up for that. Even SoFurry and Nifty churn out stuff of much better quality.
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· 8 years ago
You dont say rwby!
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ewqua
· 8 years ago
I may be a little weird but at least I didn't read it.
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this_isntme
· 8 years ago
I read all three. If you can slog through the horrible writing it's actually a good story about redemption and saving someone from the abyss that they are slowly falling into.
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