The most annoying part of the writing (aside from all of the other annoying parts) is the repeated "Oh, my"... *sigh*
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· 8 years ago
I didn't read the book. Was "oh my" really in there that much or are you making a joke I don't get?
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· 8 years ago
@mightyoak: no, it totally was in there. Perhaps I am overdramatizing, but it felt like once a page at least. I am sure it was less than that...but no less annoying and awkward.
I read all three. If you can slog through the horrible writing it's actually a good story about redemption and saving someone from the abyss that they are slowly falling into.
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