Much better version of the story.

This. This is fucking perfect.

I'd read the shit outta this and then go back and read it again.

Why aren't we funding this?!

I'm in love with this. I want this as a screensaver when I go back home.

Found my one true love<3

The truth has been spoken, finally!

I'm crying

Way better story than Twilight

Perfect

this is amazing. I was actually genuinely interested in this. This person is a genius

I will show this to everyone I know.

I REQUIRE A FANFIC.