Children and bridges :)

SAME! its 2:50 am here and i havent slept yet and i was about to until i read this

Yeah, I was kind of expecting the daughter to push her from the bridge

It's probably because as a child she still physically and mentally clings to and relies on her parents. Someone should write an epilogue where the girl is older and gets payback.

Yeah, when the mother is sitting in a wheelchair or something. Because well, with a wheelchair, she isn't 'perfect' anyway (after her definition)

wat

nice

@black_dahlia because it's a boy reborn in a girl's body

The commas are the least of the problem. The punctuation as a whole is just painful to look at.