Beautiful writing

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chilledtothebone · 7 years ago · FIRST

Oh god, just reading this I can taste the root beer scent and the humidity of the vape cloud in my throat.

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dj_na_tex · 7 years ago

This poem is a rollercoaster from beginning to the end.

mrdad01 · 7 years ago

Don't you mean a train ride?

dj_na_tex · 7 years ago

Train rides go up and down hills and may cover a good distance, and could get boring after a while.
But a good rollercoaster has loops, twists, turns and keeps you excited to be on it the whole time and leaves you wanting more.

dj_na_tex · 7 years ago

Oh wait, yeah...it literally was a train ride.

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matthewg · 7 years ago

The only thing worse is someone not asking them to stop their ridiculous behavior, and then assaulting everyone's day with it on "social" media.

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