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chilledtothebone
· 8 years ago
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Oh god, just reading this I can taste the root beer scent and the humidity of the vape cloud in my throat.
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dj_na_tex
· 8 years ago
This poem is a rollercoaster from beginning to the end.
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mrdad01
· 8 years ago
Don't you mean a train ride?
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dj_na_tex
· 8 years ago
Train rides go up and down hills and may cover a good distance, and could get boring after a while.
But a good rollercoaster has loops, twists, turns and keeps you excited to be on it the whole time and leaves you wanting more.
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dj_na_tex
· 8 years ago
Oh wait, yeah...it literally was a train ride.
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matthewg
· 8 years ago
The only thing worse is someone not asking them to stop their ridiculous behavior, and then assaulting everyone's day with it on "social" media.
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But a good rollercoaster has loops, twists, turns and keeps you excited to be on it the whole time and leaves you wanting more.