The girl's story sucked ass, though. I enjoy being alone, with a cup of tea and a good book as much as any other girl, but this is ridiculous. I'm guessing she tried to put some emotional value and a nice atmosphere into the story, but it ended up really badly IMO. What ruined it even more is that she acted so fucking high and mighty as if she was the better writer there. Well, too bad for you, girl, the guy's part was better. Sure, what he tried to do would probably end up as another stereotypical sci-fi with not much more plot than shooting and aliens going cray-cray, but her "wistful pondering" and "losing one's innocence" would be even worse if she ever finished it as an actual project.
"In your dreams, Ho. Go drink some tea."
This is funny as balls.