Not all crushes crush your heart

It’s pretty good

Where are the issues?

It switches from past and present tense in the same caption, and also uses the wrong conjugation of the first person present tense. There are spelling errors (e.g. 'steals he from me') and 'Lets' is missing an apostrophe. Also an unnecessary comma in the third caption (after 'I tell her). Last caption is missing an auxiliary verb before the past participle 'been'.

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